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Make Your Subject Line Work
July 16, 2008 | By Ivan Chalif
I just received an email from one of our partners which had a fantastic example of how to use a novel, yet relevant subject line to pique recipients' interest and get them to read your email. Here it is:
I get so many emails that either try to trick me into opening with a subject line that is unrelated to the actual content (Instantly Own your own Business) or is so generic (Missive: May 2008) that even if I know who the sender is and want their email, I am not motivated to open it because it doesn't stand out amid the other noise in my inbox.
This example above demonstrates what you can do (with minimal effort) to improve the visibility of your message. I wanted to open it just to see what they were talking about. The subject line, while somewhat cryptic, made sense to me based on who the sender was (click on the link to see the whole header and top of the content window). The offer inside wasn't my cup of tea, but I forwarded it to some folks who would be interested.
My next post will be about how you can do very simple, very easy tests on your subject line to determine which ones perform best. you can use this to try out a bunch of new ones or just compare a new one against your existing subject line. Just because it's new doesn't mean that it's better.
Stay tuned!

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